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Illumi_uchiha
Illumi_uchihaLv42yr
2022-04-19 23:51

I read only because i thought Bulma was a love interest but I'm at chap 93 and Bulma just search for a bf and want to bang yamcha so ciao...

Dragon Ball Genesis (rework)

Feverflow
2.8
136 Chs

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Feverflow
FeverflowAuthor

Sorry about taking too long for bulma’s stroyline. But I understand why you drop the series. Wish you good luck.

2yr
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JunRaya
JunRayaLv4

Thx for telling me, while it isn't really a big deal, having a pic of Bulma as a cover just makes you think that she was the love interest which was the only reason I came and see if it anything good. But ill check the first few chapters if it's any good

2yr
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TFH
TFHLv6

thanks dodged a bullet there

2yr
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3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv5

I will say no more so as not to hurt your feelings .......................................................................................................

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NPSC2377
NPSC2377Lv1

A female character in Dragon Ball who would like to propose to be the protagonist's harem : Android 18 , Android 21 (good and evil) , Angela , Miss Hamilton , Annin , Bikini (mother of Tights and Bulma) , Tights ( Bulma's older sister) , Bulma , Caulifla , Caway , Cheelai , Chi-Chi , Cocotte . Colonel Violet . Erasa , Fasha , Hasky , Heles , Kale , Kusu , Launch , Mai , Marcarita , Maron (Krillin's ex-girlfriend) , Miss Piiza , Nain , Princess Snake , Ranfan , Miss Hamilton (The English teacher at the school at Gohan went to study during the Majin Buu Saga.) , Vados , Videl , Yurin , Zangya

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Roktah
RoktahLv15

the grammar is bad, i quit after reading the first few paragraphs. Don't get me wrong, its certainly readable. His mistakes are in general small but because they are so small and so easily fixed, it annoys me even more. The mistakes are small but extremely numerous. to explain my rating. If one aspect of this story is bad enough to convince me to quit, then all other aspects, no matter how great, are irrelevant. What is the point of a great backstory or plot if your grammar annoys me to a point, that i would never manage to read it. of course this means, that if you don't mind the grammar,then this might be a great story for you.

2yr
Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

I tried to read the first 2 chapters, I really did. In the first chapter, there were some mistakes with spelling and grammar but I could ignore it if I focused a bit, sadly, in the second chapter it was so much worse! I couldn't even finish it and si Goku is one of my favorites!

2yr
Dreadix
DreadixLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Lustlara_52
Lustlara_52Lv3

The MC is more of a side character in this fic. Literally everyone is stronger than him. The worst part of this fic is the 500 word chapters.

2yr
TFH
TFHLv6

Welll.... i gave it a try... i really did... but the grammar is worse than google translation. Author dosnt knows the correct verbs tenses of in everything. I recommend he uses Grammatically.

2yr
abu_saeed
abu_saeedLv4

It's very very like very Boring. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

It’s just a pale shadow of canon and mc ain’t as smart as he thinks

2yr
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