Review Detail of Shayan212 in Build A Scientific And Technological Civilization

I love the world idea and the story idea. But first off translation 3/10 I'm sorry but I have to be honest . Second the whole story so far has been developing another xia dynasty and just shocking people. Third Mc character development is close to zero. As much as I love the idea the story is empty. It takes 200+ chapters to get into a university which is BULLSH1T. we I might just steal the idea of making a world within the body and use it in my novel.