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TaddenaLv22yr
2022-07-13 05:51

I really like this fanfic so far. I used to consider myself a picky reader, but after reading this story I realized that I am not the picky one. Although there are a lot of mistakes, I still liked it a lot, but I have to break the points because I keep my comments objective.

Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller

Nyxio
4.7
35 Chs

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Nyxio
NyxioAuthor

Hello there! This novel is a bit different to usual fanfics because there is no risk to MC's life!!! yay!!! or .............maybe no yay? Anyways, as I said, no risk to MC's life and he has a few powers that let him resurrect, age or even de-age. You get it right? OP as heck! So why am I even writing this fic if MC is already OP? Well I kinda wish that if I ever reincarnate I can get the option to get his powers xD So well it is kinda a SI cuz I want a risk-free adventure in an MCU+Mutants world. I wanna explore the heights my MC can reach. MC at the start of the story has only a few options for attack(ageing/de-ageing kinda like that particular quirk from MHA). He doesn't have mid/long-range attacks and no regen(he can resurrect though). So throughout the novel, he will collect more abilities starting from....Spiderman!!! He will keep the costume theme to be spiderman cuz I like it, and as a homage to his first superpowers, hence the title and cover... Hope you enjoy the novel!!! I read all comments and reviews and would love it if you share your views <3 I am also trying to improve at writing so that I can write what I am thinking in my head better xD so any help is appreciated!!

2yr

Naugricaz_legends
Naugricaz_legendsLv1

Nice going. Keep it up! No harem, please. No harem, please. No harem, please. No harem, please. No harem please.No harem, please. No harem please.No harem, please. No harem, please. No harem please.

3yr
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Ok so its a cool story but here are some downsides to it. The MC has the power of immortality which is cool BUT he can also “ressurect” anyone he wants to. For me this just makes everything pointless, an MC that cant struggle or experience loss is just a waste of time for me (the author states he is tired of over dramatic novels so he wants to make one where the MC can live freely) Another issue for me is precisely this, the MCs happy go lucky attitude is just once again not very interesting to read. I dont need nor do I want an edge lord MC, i want a realistic and relatable one. Not a naive child who was given power over life and death running amok lol Other than those 2-3 points the novel is pretty good. If it werent for those things id have given this a full 4 stars easy. (P.S. the MC bringing up how “smart” he is gets annoying lol)

2yr
OmnipresenceBeing
OmnipresenceBeingLv3

Nice Fanfic............................. But pls don't drop in midway.........................................................................................

3yr
WalterHeisenberg
WalterHeisenbergLv4

The Mc should definitely use age manipulation, you can do some crazy things with it, it can also help with hiding his identity by making it look like he’s older just from the build of the body, and when he wants to go back to normal Peter, he can just go back to his original age.

2yr
PetrickSetar
PetrickSetarLv13

honest review not hate review, this novel kinda messy a bit, the whole novel is like typical "redo" novel but he already got few too OP powers from the start. His "giga chad" kinda cringe a bit. he is low key but at the same time kinda stupid for letting his secret trump card out just like that.

2yr
Thehighest_throne2
Thehighest_throne2Lv1

Very good Spiderman fic and I really like it, with the antihero and egotistical mc. I suggest reading it for all of you for those who don't like Spiderman punnihero fic

2yr
OtakuSumit
OtakuSumitLv4

very good story. i will miss this story a lot. stay strong author. we all will wait for your return. ~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

2yr
DaoOfCopying
DaoOfCopyingLv4

Bro Noir is my favourite Spider-Man and Second Favorite Hero the First one being Batman, Anyways here's an 5 Star for having Noir as the Cover.

2yr
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