Review Detail of nacnuD in THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

the plot of the story and the concept of a mixture between the marvel and DC universe is a fantastic Idea but the execution is sadly underwhelming. The poor grammar makes the reading almost unbearable, which could be fixed with an editor, but so far an editor hasnt been implemented. My only other problem is the character interaction between batman and Richard as it is kind of annoying and could be resolved easily by Richard in a variety of means.