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Sake_Manis
Sake_ManisLv23yr
2022-03-25 19:43

overall everything is good, only in terms of writing that must be considered. nothing is perfect, but at least the lessons that make us perfect

100th Reincarnation

Si_Koplak
4.5
23 Chs

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AvantHeim
AvantHeimLv2

my head hurts just by reading it, the MC is supposed to be a man of 99 lives and wants to live in peace.... he speaks at the age of 2, I pass him, he beats his teacher with unknown magic, I pass him, he behaves like a child, I umm I pass him, he beats his director, this I can't stand anymore... where a child can beat an adult (and that adult doesn't question anything, as if it doesn't matter that a child has that power) , then use advanced-level space magic or something to break a barrier in a children's match, in a children's match (he wasn't supposed to stand out).... and finally and to drop this, the MC is a BETA that does not know about relationships, another child approaches the love interest of the MC and it seems that they had something, I do not know if I have read much, but these are symptoms of netorare ..... netorare = (MC beta /third character /dissatisfied woman) ----10----

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Ayu_yusti
Ayu_yustiLv3

the story is good, not boring and boring... there are only a few writings that are still lacking, more than that it is satisfactory for the readers [img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Sharon_Editor
Sharon_EditorLv3

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kursi_Tunggu
kursi_TungguLv2

the quality of the story looks good, only in terms of writing that needs to be considered, especially the point of view and others, the rest is worthy of a contract[img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
meja_makan
meja_makanLv2

the story is good, hope it gives a romantic scent to the MC. Hopefully the work goes smoothly and can be signed by Webnovel soon, Thor's spirit [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Arsy_0004
Arsy_0004Lv2

100th reincarnation, it was tantamount to exceeding a God. And in the 100th life wanting to relax being an Academy student, hmmm makes people curious and interested.

3yr
cerdas
cerdasLv2

in terms of story, plot and so on, it's good, but in terms of writing, it needs a little improvement, especially the point of view used. the rest is worthy of a contract 😁😁

3yr
ulansar0001
ulansar0001Lv3

The story is good, it makes the reader curious and asks where it will go next. However, in terms of writing, there are a few problems, especially the point of view that often changes. Hope it can be fixed

3yr
Sake_Manis
Sake_ManisLv2

the storyline is good, the character development is also cool, only there are flaws in the writing.. this seems to be the result of Thor's translation, right? need to be considered again in writing, the rest is satisfying [img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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