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glass_explosionsLv22yr
2022-04-10 18:12

The writing quality is pretty good overall, though there are quite a few run-on sentences and a lot of curse words. The story seems quite interesting so far, and the idea is pretty original! So far, the title seems confusing, but I'm sure it will make more sense as more chapters are released :) Keep it up, author! I can't wait to see where you take us.

I told the stars about you~

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i hope you will get to understand why the title is 'I told the stars about you' in the upcoming chapters.. tysm for ur review xoxo

2yr
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Sandipan_Dutta_7440
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Its a interesting start the characters look interesting and the writing style is also good looking for more chapters keep updating and keep writing

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Valhaller
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The story seems interesting and the different povs are somewhat refreshing. Good thing that the moments when the pov changes are marked clearly, as otherwise it could be very confusing. Whish there were more chapters to read through!

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Shambles_
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The story looks interesting and has potential for the future. If the author keeps updating constantly, I can see this book going far. Other than that, I have issues with the length of chapters. I hope the author can fix that and make the chapters longer. Other than than, this is a nice book I highly recommended to read.

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Atharv_Mishra_7779
Atharv_Mishra_7779Lv1

Every story you write is just a unique experience. It seems like you have such a magical pen at your home, huh? You presented your ideas and thoughts really well on the paper. I appreciate your talent. I wish I could write anything close to that. That’s too good! I am really impressed with your writing style. Keep it up! :)

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Kota_Sama
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My overall opinion so far is that the story seems interesting and has a different approach on the isekai genre. The approach taken is generally unique and I like the way the characters are brought in. As it's rare for me to leave reviews, I'll keep this saved and leave more of an opinion down the road. For now I think the writing is good and the world development is good, and overall it's going in a good direction! looking forward to more down the road Author!!

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