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Read to 386 during the free period. Writing quality isn’t bad good but could use some work. MC will be placed in a corner one chapter only for him to really have done something else with out the reader knowing to get out of it so the action is a surprise to both reader and opposition. It is an interesting writing tool but it needs a little work. It gets a little old by the time the 300th chapter rolls around. The character development could use a little work. MC knows X,Y,Z because of reasons. Makes others dance in his palm and entertaining in small doses but appeal wears off. Other characters get dropped by massive time skips leaving large plot holes. I want to see how it all ends and ties together but unless something changes this will be a fast pass only read.

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SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

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Thanks for your honest review. I appreciate it. Chapter 386 is right about when the MC's past is introduced, right? I would like it if you went further to see the kind of life he lived, even a little bit. Many would say the MC is acting too omniscient at times, as well as having a superiority complex But it's not exactly so. Reading on his past helps identify on that. As for the other characters, and the timeskip, they are actually properly introduced in this arc. One just needs to keep reading. Thanks for the overall review though. Cheers.