Review Detail of Monke232 in SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
Review detail
Writing quality-Minimal grammatical errors and a smooth flow. However, lots of drawn out descriptions and thought processes that seem to be fluff. Story Development-Slow. MC also refuses to correct misunderstandings for no reason. A lot of the lack of development is the fault of the MC himself which can be frustrating to read. Character design-None of the other characters seem very unique. They all seem like very generic NPC’s save for their varying ages and temperaments World background-Solid. It’s a basic magic land. Not very creative but it’s all that’s needed so its good.
SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
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Magecrafter:Thanks for the review. I would like to know what chapter you reached before giving this review.
No problem! I would actually correct some of it now that I’ve read further, but I was at chapter 113 when I wrote this. I’d say now that the character has more relationships and we can see the other characters closely that they do bring depth to the story.
Magecrafter:Thanks for the review. I would like to know what chapter you reached before giving this review.
I’ll probably do a re-review soon because your review really made me realize that things do get better and I should trust the MC more.
Magecrafter:Thanks for the review. I would like to know what chapter you reached before giving this review.
Monke232:No problem! I would actually correct some of it now that I’ve read further, but I was at chapter 113 when I wrote this. I’d say now that the character has more relationships and we can see the other characters closely that they do bring depth to the story.