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2022-06-14 06:08

First of all, there are a few typos here and there and sadly they do slightly hinder the story’s fun. Secondly, I truly don’t know how to rate the World Background as in tge fee chaps I read, there was hardly anythibg other than speculation. Now then, with that out of the way! I absolutely loved the first chapter! The mc’s emotions, his suffering and his torment was beautifully portrayed! I loved how you explained that. The mc himself is also brilliant, the genius, scheming and realistic type. Also... the 4th walk breaking was a sweet addition! The story’s progression is also nice. Not too slow and not too fast, it’s nice! And... 24 chaps in last week? AUTHOR TOUCH SOME GRASS!!!! Seriously! Dod u upload all these 101 chaps in the last 4 weeks? 😶 Anyways, I believe author if you could take some time to edit the typos, your novel’s popularity would shoot high! Lastly, well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]

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