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Radioactive_Noodle
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2022-04-05 09:30

novel is good but the writing is confusing because the author does not use paragraphs/ dosent give space in between lines too often and because of that the writing is confusing, and theres the fact that a time-skip happens in those and you wont know so you go to read and you have to backtrack because somewhere in the middle of all those words a time-skip happened.plot is fine but author should have removed that reincarnation sequence because the character instead of forgetting only the part 1-10 of jojo forgets everything and its basically just dio getting memories from this random dude. Total Summary: author should put more paragraphs, stop putting the time-skips together with the text and should probably just remove the Dio from earth and imput it as dio receiving memories or that the character wished to forget

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Thanks for the constructive feedback. Although I only write for fun, it is always nice to see some nice reviews from readers. I will try to use your critiquing in the future.

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