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EldritchBlade
EldritchBladeLv112yr
2022-04-02 23:13

This review is part of a review swap. The narrative and characters are great so far. There's a balance of slice of life and hidden world fantasy that reminds me a ton of Bleach, in a good way. The two main characters have great banter and feel like real schoolboys. The main thing holding the story back is the poor grammar and mechanics of style. Many words are used incorrectly, dialogue is formatted incorrectly, and the narrative voice fluctuates so much that it makes the voices of the two main characters indistinguishable. If that doesn't bother you and you like Bleach-style fantasy, definitely check this story out!

Martyr The Devourer Of Wands

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