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I was preparing myself if the grammar wasn't good, but surprise-surprise. It was really good. The plot? Even better. The author let you know what happen so you can pretty much read it without reading the original material by making the character who told you, but without making them tell about it or even writing a flashback. The way the plot progress... It almost feel this would have happened in the real world. There is many kinds of plot so it doesn't feel repetitive in every chapters. Sometimes it was the MC making smart move, sometimes it was a random people that came to the MC. If it was someone else who help the MC, they have their own backstory and their own reason why they want to put their heads on other problem so you don't just see MC being depressed than "Bam!" a saver appear. The way the MC dealing the whole deal was unique in their own way. And also they manage to move on and have a healthy relationship. Which makes me happy for them since the in original many of them was suffering.

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Lightazen
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Go check out "Synépeies" in AO3. This story was plagiarised there. The one in AO3 has 17 chapters. And unless the author explicitly there stated that he is reposting the story in here then it's safe to aassume that this guy just stole it.