It's kind of annoying. He spends most of every chapter in his own head constantly tuning out everything around him. As professor oak would say, there's a time and place for everything, but not now. Could be good if he just monologues to himself every now and then, but it's never ending.

Good Fic. I like how the MC isn't emotional or unstable and is actually acting his age even if it is in minor things. I also like his views on the world and his way of gaining power. No waiting or playing by the books only. Potions and repetitive actions till he gets skills and/or levels them up. I like the constraints needed to get a skill or spell, and the explanation as to the importance of age (13 and 17). Really stopped plotholes with that one, so BRAVO!! Very good play.

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The writing is very good, and the flow, structure and tone story is also good. This writer has a very good foundation for some actually decent fics.The only problem is the creative decisions made at the start, which turns a lot of people from continuing to read, but I suggest you try first. If you don't mind them, itll be a good read.

it has been so long since I read a good gamer story, I looooooove it 5 stars and I usually hate au's but this was great. I just hope you keep the updates coming and not drop this wonderful story. Good Day!