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Leremita
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2022-03-21 17:02

The story is built on a template, the bad manipulator Dumbledore, the idiot Ronnie, the bad Weasels, such stories are hundreds of thousands on the sites and are no longer of interest because they spit on the souls of Potter fans.

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8Mysterious8
8Mysterious8Lv4

???!!!!! Are you OK????

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Ron is a jerk, jealous and traitor in the original story.

Leremita
LeremitaLv5

This is not the case, Ronnie stood in front of Harry many times when he was attacked for example when they thought Sirius was being attacked. Do not forget the poverty of Ron's family and other circumstances.

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Ron is a jerk, jealous and traitor in the original story.
Leremita
LeremitaLv5

The character of Ron and Hermione is best expressed in Rowling's books, so Ron's envy is perfectly understandable and should not be considered a negative character. He is not really a traitor.

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Ron is a jerk, jealous and traitor in the original story.
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