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BleakSky
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MC is pathetic and lazy. Confusing lust for love. Like seriously, he lick Nami once and she now needs her daily dose of a desperate virgin licking her. She a addict, made by the system. They spent all their time licking each other… they somehow navigated their way there… Like it literally says Nami couldn’t walk, and the MC was with her the whole time, guess the boat was made by Elon Musk. Earth body… ha ha what a joke, nerf the mc, wow. I don’t actually mind this part, if you had taken time in the beginning to flesh it out in a way that doesn’t make him look stupid(he is by the way) or hinted at it. You probably rushed it or just randomly decided this idea, idk or care. MC is trash grammar, not too great. the system is sentient… who would have guessed? Well I kinda assumed as soon as I saw the title. How this number 1? I’ll will be an enigma to me, for the rest of my life. No need for a 🧠 here if you’re going to read it.

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One Piece: Perverted Upgrade System

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BleakSky
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