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2024-02-13 07:30

Well above average Bleach fic. My main issue is that even for a fic, the growth of certain supporting characters power is a bridge too far, putting them on par with Captains. Otherwise, the writing is good, even though it uses that weird 'Name: Talks' format that for some reason dominates here. With text to speech, it's an annoyance just below infinite dashes😂 Pace felt slow but that might be me wishing the retelling of canon parts would go by faster, though I admit it's probably useful for those unfamiliar with the source material due to passing time or never having watched/read it. No idea on updates at this point as I'm way behind.

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oh that format is script format and yes it sucks

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