*Writing Quality: The writing has several typos per paragraph in the beginning, the advancement is noteworthy in later chapters but it is still quite decent compared to some other works out there, it has the correct distributions of words per paragraph, dialogues are also placed correctly in later chapters, I give three stars mostly because sometimes you're lacking pronouns or having typos that can switch the entire meaning of a sentence.
*Stability of Updates: Apparently, it is a steady schedule so 5 stars.
*Story Development: The story although generic in my view, develops sweetly at a moderate pace, MC becomes OP too soon, but anyway, that's technically a trend in fanfics at this stage which I won't judge, things are developing at their own pace and cannon has few changes to it, 5 stars.
*Character Design: This is where I believe this novel excels, the dialogues are alive, characters have gimmicks and the interactions feel real, there is love and friendship well portrayed here, 5 stars.
*World Background: There are close to no scenery descriptions, like, I take it most readers will know how danmachi's set is, but a description of the scenery, weather conditions, the sun etc... would liven up the most precious dialogues and give an ample description, in any case, I'll give three stars simply because as fanfic, this subject is not as required as in an original novel.
I'm personally enjoying the development of the romance with Hephaestus and perhaps Freya in the future, overall it is a nice read.
