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Review Detail of Barion_Trident in Minecraft Dungeons {Rise Of The Heroes}

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I have never played nor got into contact with Minecraft so this is a brand new concept for me, I see you are on the very first steps of writting, I'm the same so a bit of friendly advice, always put on a tittle on the chapter that relates to the content of it, also a bit more eloboration on the scenes would help you a lot, all in all its got potential so I hope you keep going : )

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Minecraft Dungeons {Rise Of The Heroes}

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Thanks for the review and the advice, I paused the story so I could fix them and try to make it a little longer.😊