Item: Marvel: Reborn
Rating: 1.8

WolfStar612Lv151yr

2023-08-19 00:08

So let me first say that I haven’t read but only a few chapters so if I’m super wrong then my bad, but… To me it looks like this isn’t the author’s story. I say that because the quality of the writing is not comparable at all to some of the other works they have written. Like it is so subpar compared to some of the other stuff they have posted. Maybe they got a lot better in the past year, going from 0-100. But to me it’s such a jump that it seems like a different person.

Marvel: Reborn

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