Writing Quality: Really, Really good, there are very few errors in the entirety of the fanfic. Updating Stability: From what I can tell, it’s updated consistently Story Development: Really good, there isn’t any rushed or forced moments, and it’s not to quickly paced. Character Design: Pietro (Or the new Pietro) is smart, and thinks before he acts, he doesn’t make needless or pointless mistakes, and is overall a smart and well made character. World Background: it’s the MCU, but there is more background on Pietro and Wanda’s life. Overall: A really good fanfic, and a great read. I’m excited to read more chapters and fanfics from this author!

A Gem is all i can say. A Properly well written story Characters that are written well with their own ego and personality. Dialogues are very immersive that i cant help but imagine that im Pietro himself and how he loves wanda so much that i can feel the emotions itself througu the screen. The only downsides is that the story is finish but its on patreon :'( I hope the author will share his literature to us mortal for it will brighten our daily lives.

so the MC is basically less trashier Pietro no impressive abilities at all heck he is worthless it's a fanfic so of course the MC will have an indirect unlimited growth secod the weapons also trash he can get uru or vibranium basically extremely upgradable a lot better then his wished weapons so you added nothing except more memories it also seems the MC isn't the type that has some brain on his shoulders at all only goes with the flow with occasional brain function in order to expand the plott all on all a let down

good, very good!

First I would like to thank the author for writing such an amazing story so far(ch12). Most of this story makes me feel guilty pleasure from the relationship alone. The actual plot is very interesting and I'm looking forward to what the mc plans are and how his actions will affect the mcu timeline. I wish there was a way for them to learn from kamar taj but him basically being a villain even though he is more of morally grey character shoots that down. I'm also interested in how the mc plans to become powerful enough to protect both of them with all the opportunities that knowing canon mcu provides him. All I can say to the author is don't lose interest or motivation because you've built a stong foundation for your story.

Have your one star review for your attack on my simple comment from takeing a peek at your story let this be a reminder writer are not privlage to only good words as I said readers have rights too which it seems that writer of today forget.

REALLY REALLY GOOD. Personally one of my favourite SI fics ever. Only criticism I can think of is that it ended too soon(47 chaps on patreon, story finished). Other than that kudos to the other for this wonderful work.

Hooked.

Amazing .

hey I tried finding your Patreon acc but couldn't find it. love the story by the way👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁