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Muchson
MuchsonLv141yr
2023-08-27 01:51

I read the first 20 chapters and I feel a little familiar with the author's storytelling style. Do you know what the first 20 chapters achieved: making the reader emotional with the face slapping style typical of light novels. The author directly creates a story where the MC succeeds in making a great work and the rest is where the work is tested then the NPCs around act like keyboard warrior commentators where most of them are tasked with mocking the MC for the sake of building face-slapping emotional momentum. There is no depth to the story, just a story of brain pain. I have a feeling that the next chapters will also repeat like this.

I Make Advanced Technology Weapons, Shocking Everyone

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pretty good over all just would like background info how he got the system and where he started/ came from. I need 140 charactersI need 140 characters

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needs more detail in his inventions he makes. you keep doing he Or she it's confusing. your charging coins for small chapters 馃槫

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Poor,naive,typical,waste time ,predictable,boring,IQ5 ..................................................................................................

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