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Surbhi_mithil
Surbhi_mithilLv22yr
2022-08-07 00:59

So overall, I can see potential in the author .he is putting so much effort into the world-building of the novel. Good character sketch with a great synopsis. Well done!

Transmigrated as a Recruit into a Spaceship on its 25th Voyage

DaisukiDayoSenpai
4.9
164 Chs

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiAuthor

Shameless author here reviewing his own work! Welcome to my third sci-fi novel on this platform, this is a mixture of transmigration, sci-fi, as well as space so this is an entirely new subject for me as well. But sci-fi has always been my passion ever since I was a kid, and I hope you share that passion with me as well. Power Stones, Comments, and Reviews are always welcome! I have a lot of things to improve on and I hope to hear from all of you soon. Thank you so much for dropping by! Cheers, DaisukiDayoSenpai

2yr

VanillaBearFantasy
VanillaBearFantasyLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Jaison_Arbor
Jaison_ArborLv2

The world buildup is really good, overall it's a good story, I did find the main character's personality a bit interesting, keep it up author🍃

2yr
Light_Breeze
Light_BreezeLv11

The story telling is honestly extremely good. it doesn't feel monotonous at all. Lev is someone I guess many would be able to relate to (before he gets into the voyage). it's a nice mixture between reality and fantasy. would love to see some charecter growth in upcoming chapters

2yr
Naofumi_Iwatani_
Naofumi_Iwatani_Lv1

Nice worldbuilding story and the usual science fiction from the author. I don't want to spoil but the story is actually quite fast paced, building up from the slow start of the transmigration. A good read!

2yr
Phantomfiend
PhantomfiendLv4

The first chapter here, I feel if it was written focusing on the main character in the bomb disaster it would be more interesting. Moreover, the characters who are not pushovers will be interesting to read when they are struggling and trying to live rather than the MC sleeping soundly, not being woken up by the sound of bombs or building vibrations because they are too tired. Such a concept, although possible, is not attractive. At least in Webnovel, it won't work. You should choose a concept like MC sleeping and suddenly waking up in a fantasy world or MC trying to survive a bomb attack and die, getting isekai'd to another world. In Webnovel, the first chapter is important because it acts as bait for the readers. That's why my review focuses on that chapter. For the second to fifth chapter, I think it's fine. I enjoyed reading it.

2yr
bitterlouise
bitterlouiseLv5

This is perfectly written I could cry😭 I don't have anything to say, actually just...PERFECT. I'm hungry for more. Give me some words of wisdom, Author🙏 Lol🤭

2yr
Roth_Raven
Roth_RavenLv13

Just Whoaaaaaaaaaa! Not only the synopsis is awesome, the story is!!! The chapters gets you hooked on! This is wonderful to the peak. Deserves the five stars!!!.

2yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
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