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REDVILv42yr
2022-04-26 06:37

The mc is way too dumb for me. all the desicions he makes are so stupid that it makes me want to strangle him. Read to find out if you like it or not just my opinion.

Doomsday Game: My Shelter Can Be Upgraded Infinitely

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No_No_9881
No_No_9881Lv2

I only read 10 chapters then i stopped reading, the mc is so dumb that just give free food in a apocalypsis for example to take an elevator he just give 5 cans of food for the only reason that it's time it's important..

2yr

Solfern
SolfernLv14

best thing Is synopsis do not match content inside i am at chapter 62 and mc Is using gold coins And not points And Hes ONLY one with system rest Are just poor people trying to suvive. in content It says catastrophe started over 100 year And then there Are some 40 years people that remember times before .. Its some how luckluster but not terrible

2yr
Chaos1
Chaos1Lv14

ok this is going to be as honeat as i can make it. the story and world background is really good. the Mc is dumb there is no getting around that. the bigeat issue for me is the grammer cuz at certin timea it is just barely readable and makes no sence. the names keep changing which i find is a common trope in these kind of chineese novels. alot of diffrent termenology being thrown around that just makes the novel unreadable. i would be fine by the quality if it did not have locked chapters. seriously i do not understand why ppl lock chapters if the novel has this manny grammer issues. this just my opinion you do not have to share it. i came to this conclusion after reading 30 chapyers

2yr
Aquadiver289
Aquadiver289Lv15

I am only slightly more than 10 chapters into this novel and translation is bad, math is even worse, and every single person is about as sharp as marble. Not a single person truly questions how the MC is able to acquire anything. As far as I can tell, there is no dimensional pocket technology in this world, and despite this, nobody questions how the MC is able to pull out dozens of cans from literally nowhere. The MC's explanations of what is going on holds about as much water as a soup strainer. I am willing to read bad novels, but this is just too much. How did this show up as a recommended book?

3mth
Sadarsa
SadarsaLv4

While everyone is talking about the wastefulness of the MC, I just can't help but think about the system instead. Normally the system is used to construct the shelter. But this system is telling him to dig the space and reinforce the walls. Other than the food and water it provided, the MC's doing all the work.

2yr
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