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Pickle_Jar
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2022-03-19 18:33

Ok, first thing you should know is that I'm not in to slice-of-life/romantic drama type of novels(you can verify this from the novels I posted comments/reading list) so my review is as clean as it gets.Now with this out of the way,I got this novel added to my library by clicking on a user gift. Before i was going to remove it,I thought to at least read the synopsis and I did,from there I stopped at chapter 15(right before posting this review). The novel is about an "innocent" sarcastic hardworking girl being pulled in to "the rich world" by helping/saving the second son of a rich dude sounds simple no? but it's not, you start to uncover some plots behind the event. So far the author did a good job not to oversimplifies the starting plot and to add clues (I think 🙄) to how may the story evolve! There's comedy and the dialogues are well written. I find this novel, light and refreshing,you can read it drinking your ☕ or when you pretend to do work/studies. I gave it 4,4/5 🌟 cuz i enjoyed reading it. It "cleaned my palate" so to say after reading to much "arrogant young master" and "face-slapping" MC. So for the ones that aren't in to the "slice of life/drama" etc just give it a try you may like it,for the rest at least read 3-4 chapters before you decide to skip it. Thanks for surviving reading until now(I didn't expect to write this much). This is my two words in the 15 chapters that I've read so far. Have a nice day!

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Taoist6GPenguin
Taoist6GPenguinAuthor

Thank you so much for writing such a long review!! I'm glad you gave this story a chance, and I love reading you comments as you try to deduce the plot HURHURHUR 😏😏😏 I'm glad that my novel made you happy!!!!

Pickle_Jar
Pickle_JarLv5

I was really joking in the comments with the "Sherlock Holmes" thing😅.Thanks again for taking time to reply and discuss/joke with the readers.

Taoist6GPenguin:Thank you so much for writing such a long review!! I'm glad you gave this story a chance, and I love reading you comments as you try to deduce the plot HURHURHUR 😏😏😏 I'm glad that my novel made you happy!!!!
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Taoist6GPenguin
Taoist6GPenguinAuthor

You are very welcome!! FEEL FREE TO LEAVE MORE COMMENTS whether its deductive or not 😂😂😂 its fun for me too!!

Pickle_Jar:I was really joking in the comments with the "Sherlock Holmes" thing😅.Thanks again for taking time to reply and discuss/joke with the readers.
Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360
Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360Lv2

o kind sir, m new to this.. romance/sof thing, and i really don't like when the female lead avoids the mc and than when other characters come in she "tries"(not really🙄) to avoid them creating a lot of drama(hate this from the bottom of my heart), and is the male lead really the main character or not...i mean if there r multiple pov(s), does the male lead have the majority of pov time(even better if no other povs, just about the male lead).

Taoist6GPenguin:You are very welcome!! FEEL FREE TO LEAVE MORE COMMENTS whether its deductive or not 😂😂😂 its fun for me too!!
Taoist6GPenguin
Taoist6GPenguinAuthor

READ IT AND FIND OUT! 😉

Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360:o kind sir, m new to this.. romance/sof thing, and i really don't like when the female lead avoids the mc and than when other characters come in she "tries"(not really🙄) to avoid them creating a lot of drama(hate this from the bottom of my heart), and is the male lead really the main character or not...i mean if there r multiple pov(s), does the male lead have the majority of pov time(even better if no other povs, just about the male lead).
Pickle_Jar
Pickle_JarLv5

Try to imagine the novel as you watch a movie plot (and you have some pages from the script),then will be easy for you to change the point of view from the FL to the ML,in my opinion there's not a main character, both of them are . Anyway that's just my opinion, everyone has different styles when reading, just like authors have different styles of writings. Maybe it's not your cup of tea.

Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360:o kind sir, m new to this.. romance/sof thing, and i really don't like when the female lead avoids the mc and than when other characters come in she "tries"(not really🙄) to avoid them creating a lot of drama(hate this from the bottom of my heart), and is the male lead really the main character or not...i mean if there r multiple pov(s), does the male lead have the majority of pov time(even better if no other povs, just about the male lead).
Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360
Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360Lv2

That's it!! my way of reading is a bit different??i mean, i like to read with the view point of the protagonist of the story so i get irritated when there is no absolute protagonist, as he just keeps on getting lead by the nose, and am not particularly fond of female protagonists(cuz.... obviously, u already know).r there no romance focused stories with male protagonist???i really like sweet romance without useless drama, but i can't seem to find one with male protagonist. do u know bout any such novel?

Pickle_Jar:Try to imagine the novel as you watch a movie plot (and you have some pages from the script),then will be easy for you to change the point of view from the FL to the ML,in my opinion there's not a main character, both of them are . Anyway that's just my opinion, everyone has different styles when reading, just like authors have different styles of writings. Maybe it's not your cup of tea.
Pickle_Jar
Pickle_JarLv5

I've observed that you used the name of ML from SAO as username,(not like me that makes usernames with whatever i have on my hands at that moment 🙄 like a jar of pickles),my guess is that you're more inclined to videogames type of novels (correct me if im wrong). I think will be disrespectful to the author to recommend you another novel on the review thread of his novel. I personally like his style of writing (presenting the plot from different perspectives) but that's me and everyone has own preference.

Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360:That's it!! my way of reading is a bit different??i mean, i like to read with the view point of the protagonist of the story so i get irritated when there is no absolute protagonist, as he just keeps on getting lead by the nose, and am not particularly fond of female protagonists(cuz.... obviously, u already know).r there no romance focused stories with male protagonist???i really like sweet romance without useless drama, but i can't seem to find one with male protagonist. do u know bout any such novel?
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Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360
Kazuto_Kirigaya_9360Lv2

umm, i totally forgot about my username until u mentioned it, is just cuz SAO was one of the first animes i watched and i really enjoyed watching it (i enjoyed the 1st season the most 🙂), m not particularly inclined to anything right now (tho i do like video game/VR or such genre).i totally didn't mean to insult he author, i mean even the author must be a reader right? and it was just an open to recommendation kind of thing from basically anyone.

Pickle_Jar:I've observed that you used the name of ML from SAO as username,(not like me that makes usernames with whatever i have on my hands at that moment 🙄 like a jar of pickles),my guess is that you're more inclined to videogames type of novels (correct me if im wrong). I think will be disrespectful to the author to recommend you another novel on the review thread of his novel. I personally like his style of writing (presenting the plot from different perspectives) but that's me and everyone has own preference.
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