Review Detail of jdbeue in Meant to be forever

Alright.... There are a few problems that are glaringly obvious. The grammar is not that great, and the punctuation needs a serious uplift. There are so many problems with the sentence structure that need to be fixed if I want to even start reading this novel. The story is fine and has a quite interesting premise. But the way the characters were introduced did not strike me as pretty great. I think that it should be worked on as well. If you are looking for a novel with only the story in mind, then this is pretty good, but all the important parts like the good building of suspense, and the like are glaringly missing.