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deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv133yr
2022-03-27 14:16

For most people I'm sure this story is pretty decent if not good honestly the grammar is decent, from the first chapter at least that's all I read, the only things that may throw you off is some of the problems people have had with the original version of my gravity falls fic from a year ago which would be the format being akin to a play script with the name and dialogue after. Beyond that I think it could be a decent story I'd have to see what future chapters bring to decide if the plot is one the cringe end of the spectrum and when I say cringe I mean the stories that make me cringe like the new anakin story it irks me how they dealt with Watto and such revealing so much unnecessarily. Anyways I think this is a decent story and giving the first chapter a read at the very least would be worth your time. And to the author of thos story I do wish you the best of luck I'll make sure to update my review when necessary.

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DaoOfCopying
DaoOfCopyingAuthor

"... I think i should continue this one."

DaoOfCopying
DaoOfCopyingAuthor

"Or after i think? I'm not good with Time.*

deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv13

Mayne you should it's not a bad story from I've read its certainly alot better than how mine was lol

DaoOfCopying:"... I think i should continue this one."
deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv13

And you very well might've read my book at the time I do believe mine was the only gravity falls story that wasn't bill dip, and about your other question that got deleted of how I stumbled upon it I was just curious if my story was the only gravity falls story still at least the only one not dropped lol.

DaoOfCopying:"Or after i think? I'm not good with Time.*
deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv13

And chances are it was before you wrote yours since mune is a year old maybe 2 I've rewritten it twice now but I'm writing the final version rn and people are happy I'm back

DaoOfCopying:"Or after i think? I'm not good with Time.*
DaoOfCopying
DaoOfCopyingAuthor

"Ever tried writing an full fledge SCP Story? I mean in the SCP Universe there's no Canon so that's a great idea just grab an SCP and trow em into you're FanFic viola"

deadly_orange:And you very well might've read my book at the time I do believe mine was the only gravity falls story that wasn't bill dip, and about your other question that got deleted of how I stumbled upon it I was just curious if my story was the only gravity falls story still at least the only one not dropped lol.
deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv13

Actually I did write one it is SCP 2000 Jeff The Killer or something like that

DaoOfCopying:"Ever tried writing an full fledge SCP Story? I mean in the SCP Universe there's no Canon so that's a great idea just grab an SCP and trow em into you're FanFic viola"
DaoOfCopying
DaoOfCopyingAuthor

"But isn't SCP-2000 Deus Ex Machina? In the Foundation File's."

deadly_orange:Actually I did write one it is SCP 2000 Jeff The Killer or something like that
deadly_orange
deadly_orangeLv13

It was 6000 I chose a number that wasn't used at the time I made it. I think it's even his canonical number from what I saw but could be wrong

DaoOfCopying:"But isn't SCP-2000 Deus Ex Machina? In the Foundation File's."
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