For most people I'm sure this story is pretty decent if not good honestly the grammar is decent, from the first chapter at least that's all I read, the only things that may throw you off is some of the problems people have had with the original version of my gravity falls fic from a year ago which would be the format being akin to a play script with the name and dialogue after. Beyond that I think it could be a decent story I'd have to see what future chapters bring to decide if the plot is one the cringe end of the spectrum and when I say cringe I mean the stories that make me cringe like the new anakin story it irks me how they dealt with Watto and such revealing so much unnecessarily. Anyways I think this is a decent story and giving the first chapter a read at the very least would be worth your time. And to the author of thos story I do wish you the best of luck I'll make sure to update my review when necessary.
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LIKEAnd you very well might've read my book at the time I do believe mine was the only gravity falls story that wasn't bill dip, and about your other question that got deleted of how I stumbled upon it I was just curious if my story was the only gravity falls story still at least the only one not dropped lol.
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