Review Detail of IdiotRick in Divine Hack System

Author writes well, there are few mistakes gramatically if any. Story focuses on Mc's POV which is standard for this type of novel. The novel throws little shade onto the supporting characters but again the MC is the primary focus of the novel so don't expect much in this regard. If i were to make any requests for the novel it would be exploring other characters POV's, and giving the MC some goals beyond exploring his system and becoming stronger. A cool-ish idea would be a POV Chapter where somone in the military has some sort of last stand vs monsters before he dies. The MC would then together with his class/year go to do cleanup of the area. This scenario could put some weight onto the MC's goal of becoming stronger.