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I have a real problem enjoying stories where the MC is mentally deficient yet presented as normal. If you are at a yard sale and someone offers you a solid gold statue weighing thousands of pounds at a price of any random 3 Pokémon cards. So you bring him 3 the first 3 you found on Craigslist. He goes "holographic mint 1st edition charizards!" and he gets really exited and loses his shit a little bit and shoves the gold at you. Then eagerly says "I'll buy everything you can bring me" you might take the deal but find it odd. If after sleeping on it and spending a couple days collecting more Pokémon cards you still go "He seemed very eager to give me a statue worth 3billion in gold for the first 3 Pokémon cards I picked up at the flea market for $20, well whatevrr!" You are a Forest Gump level individual at best. It works when plot armor is the foundation of the story, not so much when you are supposed to belive the protagonist is at least normal level intelligent. Any normal person will try and figure out why this individual values a seemingly common thing to such a degree. If someone knocked on your door and offered you a casheres check for 100million for your normal 3 bedroom houseright now, after accepting and cashng the check you would start to investigate why they would do something so seemingly stupid. This is the level of imbalance the first trade the MC makes and never bothers to go past "that was weird. Moving on!"

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Thousand Years Trade: Trading SSS Rank Talent At The Beginning

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