Review Detail of Logan_Stevens_3358 in All For One SYSTEM

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Logan_Stevens_3358Lv12yrLogan_Stevens_3358

the novel is absolute garbage the english is barely readable and the story is boring and makes no sense like in chapter 1 he just walkes into a nurse using a vibrator like yeah dont phone the police or tell your aunt no just continue like nothing happened and thats just chapter 1 it only gets worse from there.

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Brotwin_haknAuthorBrotwin_hakn

thank you your reply but that is my first novel and the nurse character is a shy character one so if she or he tells anyone it will be make thing more disturbe than its already is but thank you for your advice I will try to make it better.

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