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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv153yr
2022-03-07 08:18

Chapter 1 was an interesting read and the story is quite compelling. Really interested to see what Owen and Lydia and their boss have in store for Asher and the reasoning behind, what I assume is their order, for the murder of his parents. There are very few grammatical errors and makes it quite the easy read. It wasn’t until the end that I understood the 18+ tag. Great start and added to my collection to see where it goes. Keep up the great work author!

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Demonqueen6
Demonqueen6Author

thank you for the review, I appreciate it.... but Asher's parents are already dead, Xd.

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6

Before starting I wanna know how big the harem will be , how loyal Mc will be and if romance will be fact or just sideline adds

Demonqueen6:thank you for the review, I appreciate it.... but Asher's parents are already dead, Xd.
Demonqueen6
Demonqueen6Author

He'll be loyal to all his harem lovers, but he won't love them as much as he'll love Miles. Romance won't be the fact, because his goals are to keep growing strong.

WISEDRAGON:Before starting I wanna know how big the harem will be , how loyal Mc will be and if romance will be fact or just sideline adds
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