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LesserCodex
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In this review I will sum up what you should expect in this fan fiction. I gave myself 4.2 starts instead of five because there are things I still have to improve. First this is a harem story with 5 love interests which have already been decided. 1. Artemis 2. Hephaestus 3. Rose Fannett 4. Ryuu Lion 5. Riveria Ljos Alf Grammar: It took a while for me but I was able to improve my writing as the story went on you cal look at the highlighted reviews as proof you'll some mistakes here and there but it doesn't put you away from the immersion. Story: The story is a bit fast-paced but I aim to slow it down a little to improve on the world in the next volume along with the history of alchemy in danmachi. Character: I took the time to write good relationships between the MC and the other characters everyone has some time in the story for themselves, Freya too though I don't like her character I will make her better in the next volume. Update stability: I gave myself 4 stars I'm now aiming to release 3 times a week on Monday Tuesday and Friday maybe some surprise extra chapters when I have the time to write.

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Alchemist Amongst Gods

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MurderMoon
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I rate the effort Might just be the most honest author review I’ve seen on this site despite being on it for years