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SIENDONIALv42yr
2022-04-05 23:40

This is my honest review sir/mam I think your style and way of writing is very good. I think the biggest problem is the visualization of characters, places, weapons, etc. Then, sometimes you forgot about your own concept like [...], you forgot to add ] at the end of the sentence or you forgot to use . or , That's all :)

Blood Dragon Khan

ArkAnghel
4.8
34 Chs

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Been lurking through webnovel to find a good book book to read and this book pass by and hook my interest. Looking forward to the progress of the story. Rooting success for dear author <3

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ArkAnghel's Blood Dragon Khan is a Fresh and Fascinating novel about War and Military. The Characters are sharply interesting. Its fast-paced plot, bloody brilliant. I believe that the Author will improve in the other areas of writing like Tone and Transition. Overall, this novel is a world worth taking.

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I love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ I love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^ I love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please![img=recommend]

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razyro
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I will leave a genuine review here... I'm an imaginative person, and I'm able to imagine the world setting well and stuff... but did you forget to add what the characters look like?? Or did I miss that part? Other than that part, I will say it's quite interesting. It's very detailed which I enjoy. The plot is getting more interesting as I read on. The characters have interesting personalities that you can differentiate easily. But the plot makes up for the little errors in the book. I looking forward to the updates

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Aries_Monx
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Just from the start, the scenes were introduced in a cinematic way, allowing the reader to imagine it as if they were watching a movie. The prose is good, minimal grammar errors, and the lore of the world is very well-crafted. All the dragons in the synopsis are interesting in their own right. Looking forward to it.

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It's a good book, would recommend everyone to read it. ......... ................ ......... ..............................

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Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? Well, in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. You are hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it. Not this one. From reading that first sentence until the last. I felt nothing but satisfaction and cravings for more contents

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