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Sirione
SirioneLv53yr
2022-03-07 07:52

well, it's not bad, it's even good, but it has some problems for example there are certain words that don't make sense like "taurus"... and I'm a little worried about the tag "harem" because a lot of naruto fanfics lose quality when put harem in history.

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Northeast
NortheastLv6

i dont speak his language, but taurus is an english word, and it comes from greek , it means bull, or a specific constelation

Nightrow
NightrowLv5

Taurus comes from Latin and it means bull. Yes, people use it in names and things because it sounds cool, but it's not an English word. Moreover Latin has no influence in Japanese, so Taurus and those kind of words make no sense in a Naruto setting. Like Tire Kubo and his fixiation with Spanish, at least bleach is in a modern setting so I can ignore it. But Naruto is its own world.

Northeast:i dont speak his language, but taurus is an english word, and it comes from greek , it means bull, or a specific constelation
Northeast
NortheastLv6

if you want to correct me, at least do it right, taurus comes from the greek language, and was used by the romans as a loan word, the native word for bull in latin is bōs, and yes 'Taurus' IS used by japanese people in various specific contexts

Nightrow:Taurus comes from Latin and it means bull. Yes, people use it in names and things because it sounds cool, but it's not an English word. Moreover Latin has no influence in Japanese, so Taurus and those kind of words make no sense in a Naruto setting. Like Tire Kubo and his fixiation with Spanish, at least bleach is in a modern setting so I can ignore it. But Naruto is its own world.
Nightrow
NightrowLv5

Chill. And you're wrong. Taurus comes from the greco-roman myth of the minoTAUR. It's a Latin word, greeks used it. But the procence is Latin. You need to learn how to take a critique, since I wasn't even being mean spirited or insulting. All I said it's that Latin words do not fit in medieval Japanese world.

Northeast:if you want to correct me, at least do it right, taurus comes from the greek language, and was used by the romans as a loan word, the native word for bull in latin is bōs, and yes 'Taurus' IS used by japanese people in various specific contexts
Northeast
NortheastLv6

ok professor, you just subverted the ethmology of the word because you can, now publish your paper and you will be rewarded

Nightrow:Chill. And you're wrong. Taurus comes from the greco-roman myth of the minoTAUR. It's a Latin word, greeks used it. But the procence is Latin. You need to learn how to take a critique, since I wasn't even being mean spirited or insulting. All I said it's that Latin words do not fit in medieval Japanese world.
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Nightrow
NightrowLv5

You're an idiot. 😂 You know what? Just google it.

Northeast:ok professor, you just subverted the ethmology of the word because you can, now publish your paper and you will be rewarded
ratuzin
ratuzinLv5

I don't know why waste time arguing with him... after he didn't understand that it's ridiculous to use names of other nationalities in a world that is totally Japanese culture(Uchiha Bob is the biggest heap of idiocy) so it's not worth arguing because it's like talking to the wall and getting stressed... (it could be even worse than trying to argue with the wall because the wall doesn't change the argument to something meaningless)

Nightrow:You're an idiot. 😂 You know what? Just google it.
ratuzin
ratuzinLv5

The first records of the word Taurus in English come from the late 1300s. It comes from the LATIN word meaning “bull.” In astrology, the different signs of the zodiac are thought to be associated with certain personality traits.

Northeast:ok professor, you just subverted the ethmology of the word because you can, now publish your paper and you will be rewarded
YaGa
YaGaLv14

are you dumb dude.

Northeast:ok professor, you just subverted the ethmology of the word because you can, now publish your paper and you will be rewarded
Dfransginola
DfransginolaLv5

he ded

YaGa:are you dumb dude.
Dfransginola
DfransginolaLv5

You started it first so face what you started. wave to the camera if you can't handle criticism.

Northeast:if you want to correct me, at least do it right, taurus comes from the greek language, and was used by the romans as a loan word, the native word for bull in latin is bōs, and yes 'Taurus' IS used by japanese people in various specific contexts
Wvttz
WvttzLv4

i thought they were two similar animals

Northeast:i dont speak his language, but taurus is an english word, and it comes from greek , it means bull, or a specific constelation
Uchiha_Bob
Uchiha_BobLv1

....

ratuzin:I don't know why waste time arguing with him... after he didn't understand that it's ridiculous to use names of other nationalities in a world that is totally Japanese culture(Uchiha Bob is the biggest heap of idiocy) so it's not worth arguing because it's like talking to the wall and getting stressed... (it could be even worse than trying to argue with the wall because the wall doesn't change the argument to something meaningless)
Xenofage
XenofageLv4

How dare you insult uchiha bob like that

ratuzin:I don't know why waste time arguing with him... after he didn't understand that it's ridiculous to use names of other nationalities in a world that is totally Japanese culture(Uchiha Bob is the biggest heap of idiocy) so it's not worth arguing because it's like talking to the wall and getting stressed... (it could be even worse than trying to argue with the wall because the wall doesn't change the argument to something meaningless)
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