Story has a lot of potential, grammar needs to be improved & auth need to work on makin better background for us to understand, the main char is a bit too dumb but that's okay if you include it in the beginning so we know what to expect which brings the other point, the summary doesnt tell you anything
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LIKECAN SOMEONE PLEASE explain to me why the one of author's alt Sith_Cloud is going around being an aggressive homophobe? His alt account which he basically flat out admins to only reviews and comments against readers posts "boyfriend" like the ultimate insult and misuses the word simp over and over, this toxic attitude is disgusting.