So far the story is really interesting, some people are saying that grammar is bad or that the character is being wasted because it’s going in a certain route. I don’ believe that at all, maybe the first few chapters had small grammatical errors but it's a solid 7/10 and keeps getting better. The story has had good progress and character development and all side characters feel like they have their importance and are not just added in, they have personality and it's interesting even if the MC is not in the chapter. This is one of the few marvel fanfictions that is actually good with all of the added details and world building, I really don't understand why there are users giving it a low rating, maybe they're used to reading garbage every chapter and once something good comes up, they can't comprehend it? Either way give this a shot, it's 90% better than anything marvel related that I've read and if you regret it then I don't care, not like you had anything better to do.
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