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Here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: The author's writing quality is actually outstanding. The grammar is good and easier to understand. A couple of shifting tenses that is in need to be fixed. What I mostly bothered about is, the emotions of the other characters are not mostly portrayed. I am a bit confused and curious of their emotions since the author only mostly focuses on the MC and not the others. SoU: 5/5 Reason: The author updates daily and I think that is a good thing. SD: 5/5 Reason: I think the novel is quite good especially the pace of the novel. It wasn't too fast nor too slow and the author actually explained a lot of the plot for the readers to easily understand what is going on with the novel. Quite a good touch for hiding plot holes. Kudos to that. CD: 3/5 Reason: I give the character design 3 stars for not showing much more to the description of the MC. I know his name and his ability, but i don't know what he looks like.. Maybe a bit description of the MC would show what the kid before and after gaining some of his abilities. WB: 4/5 Reason: The background is great. I don't really much have a problem with the plot. The author really hid tons of plot holes even from the earlier chaps. Overall: 4.2/5 Reason: I was impressed by the amount of effort to make such a good plot for this novel. Just a couple of tweaks in editing the earlier chaps would be great and I am pretty sure, I will see this one at the top someday. Kudos!

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Strike The Sun!

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Thank you for the pointers you have mentioned. Will try to improve on those you have called out as the story progresses.. And I'm actually planning to revise the earlier chapters someday. Hope you check it out by then..