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Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv112yr
2022-03-04 15:28

A great read indeed,I loved how the characters were identified and the plot is amazing, would look forward to reading more chapters soon,I will recommend this book.

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Currently motivated to write more [img=recommend]

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Love the spirit

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