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Skirata
SkirataLv151yr
2023-10-19 09:02

I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read

I Help A NPC Become The Legendary Witch

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858 Chs

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