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Iceman7422
Iceman7422Lv42yr
2022-06-07 06:39

Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

AJPaturde
4.3
363 Chs

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AJPaturde
AJPaturdeAuthor

He gets a new element after cultivating enough mana affinity required for the next element. World background, sure, I have not explored the world out of his house and the Vr-cade. Nothing is explained, you say, I get it.

2yr
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M0R1
M0R1Lv1

I agree. Same thoughts, thinking of dropping and coming back to this later

2yr
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Pyrozian
PyrozianLv15

All the novels that are bad or average delete all reviews that don’ praise them as perfect

2yr
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animelover1845
animelover1845Lv4

amazing to have another novel from you. I love how the writer has mixed the world of science with magic. you do not get to see this often, do you? moreover, it has a totally different but fascinating world building. and the characters are well developed too best of luck, author

2yr

Ayushree_Paturde
Ayushree_PaturdeLv1

Mind blowing mix of Apocalypse, Video games, and magic academy elements. You have created a unique novel. I kind of liked the starting chapters of the novel, there are not much chapters but I hope to read more. Best of luck with the WPC contest!

2yr
Daoist47fDAL
Daoist47fDALLv1

I was just randomly going through cultivation novels when my paths crossed with this master piece. Well, at least not less than a work worth recognition. Here are my thoughts about this amazing novel: 1. The world building is amazing (Although it comes late into action) 2. The fights are amazing 3. Amazing cultivation concept 4. The video game elements are mixed together with the apocalypse genre perfeclty. Good work, best of luck.

2yr
loceinging
loceingingLv1

I was looking for something like this. sorry, I am not used to writing reviews. but this novel caught my attention because come on, where do you have the fun of enjoying both advanced tech and magic beasts at the same time? absolutely amazing story line with literally no plot holes

2yr
Stoic_iam
Stoic_iamLv1

I would rate this novel a little above average. if it was not for the amazing world building and update stability, I would have rated it average.

2yr
Rappel
RappelLv15

Not really good in my opinion. Characters are lacking. Story is weird to say the least. No background explanation at all. Writing quality was good though.

2yr
SkyRyzer
SkyRyzerLv2

finished chapter 20. the use of words in writing is not easy to understand. too quickly change POV, and lack of further explanation. [img=exp]

2yr
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv10

The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?

2yr
EtherealStar
EtherealStarLv15

Reveal spoiler

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