Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
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I may delete this review for a new one later on but starting from the beginning I've found the MC very unlikable. His first strike is when he questioned if he should save a random dying woman even tho he's basically a God. He's scared to reveal his powers even to weakling nobody's as well. The whole hiding your powers and being neutral morally trope is old and overused on WN. This character is a pile of cliche and so far its pretty boring. I havent given up on the story but I feel I've already grasped the childish nature of the authors writing style. I would love to see a fanfic explore no game no life but we will see if I can even make it to that arc.
Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
Houssem
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It's not that it's bad in the literal sense, but in the fact that it's already been seen a lot, a protagonist who wants to hide his power and live a peaceful life is already boring, I've seen it in too many novels.
genisis_gaia_boss:... your description is in fact jumbled.... in the novel itself he was stated to save her because of morality, THEN because she was beautiful did he actually take her in.... to the writer of this review, here's my stance : So if there are these super powerful entities, One of which even allowed you to awaken your Hax the first place, would you not be scared? also at the time he didn't hold enough strength to counter entities like Muzan to... if you was seeing as a threat he definitely would have been killed. I also personally don't know what's wrong with a peaceful MC, but hey that's just your opinion and I can't really say anything against that.
NatsuTempest:thanks for saying this now I will not have to read the story because 1 of the things that always make me drop a story is usually when mc wants to hide their power or want a peaceful life
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
that.... he just whent from chinese villian in my head to japan hentai villian with chinese behavior ? xD .... you made this way worse xD .... fist i thought maybe il give it a try anyways but then i scrolled to ur comment and became like nah bruh
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
... your description is in fact jumbled.... in the novel itself he was stated to save her because of morality, THEN because she was beautiful did he actually take her in.... to the writer of this review, here's my stance : So if there are these super powerful entities, One of which even allowed you to awaken your Hax the first place, would you not be scared? also at the time he didn't hold enough strength to counter entities like Muzan to... if you was seeing as a threat he definitely would have been killed. I also personally don't know what's wrong with a peaceful MC, but hey that's just your opinion and I can't really say anything against that.
Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
