Review Detail of evodbz134 in Invincible Grand Magus : a wmw fanfic

Item: Invincible Grand Magus : a wmw fanfic
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

evodbz134Lv141yrevodbz134

why did you make it a incest man really why it could have been so much more. it actually is a different story written in magus world. the plot seems engaging if only the incest was not so on the nose.

Invincible Grand Magus : a wmw fanfic

Blood_Dao_

Liked it!

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Blood_Dao_AuthorBlood_Dao_

Gonna cut that in the re write

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evodbz134Lv14evodbz134

when will you rewrite

Blood_Dao_:Gonna cut that in the re write

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Blood_Dao_AuthorBlood_Dao_

Im at it, will upload all the re written chaps at once.

evodbz134:when will you rewrite

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