MC is pathetic tbh no other way to say it. Read the prologue and you'll understand. Writing is decent apart from the stupid exercises he's made to do, ( he's ten years old and runs 100km, for those that don't know thats 62 miles or like running from Paris to Orleans, and would take the best long distance runner alive 10 hours and 34 minutes on average to run, without a break, and i think he did it in 5??) Makes fire thats hotter than the sun (would vaporise at least the country and surrounding oceans in an instant). It's little things like this that really make a break a story for me. But then again this is my opinion you could like this.

Honestly, apart from the fact that it is one of the few that are being made that are updating multiversal group chat or similar things, it has nothing special, if you check other fanfics of this theme you will realize that it is basically the same, typical MC with a painful or tragic past (maybe not the same) that reincarnates or continues in his world, his past does not impact anything apart from unimportant situations or that are only references to meet women, the MC has a lot of abilities but only uses the typical ones that everyone gets, elemental magic and stuff like that, I mean it's not that it's not a logical choice, it's just that it's nothing special and it's basically reading any fanfic where they give you powers, always choosing Tensura stuff because it's OP because they only know that anime/manga well and ignore a lot of more OP abilities. Well, like I said nothing special or original to read, what bothers me the most is that the past so tragic with his family and with so many women who disappointed and betrayed him doesn't help because the MC when he starts with the system doesn't care about anything, he doesn't become less friendly with women, in fact the opposite and becomes extremely nice and wants to meet all women, in general for the MC to hate the hero of Arifureta that extremist of good, he is basically the same but without so many complaints, but basically the same, a hero who helps everyone.

Your life is nothing, you serve zero purpose, you should kill yourself NOW, and give somebody else a piece of that oxygen in the ozone layer that's covered up so we can breathe inside of this blue trapped bubble. Like what are you even here for? A short dopamine rush in you degenerate life? Kill yourself. and I mean that with a hundred percent, with a thousand percent.

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So far pretty good. I just hope mc ain’t that hero type and is a little cold. Since this is a harem fic then i suggest not more than 10 as anymore than that is too much. If mc gets the chance to return to his OG world i hope he ain’t gonna be nice to them all especially his x. Oh yeh pls don’t make him a simp or beta. If he is travelling to diff worlds then i recommend AOT, SAO, Akame Ga Kill, One Piece, Naruto, Arifureta, DxD. Just my opinion but i hope mc gets the Yandere-ish/Cold type of girls XD. Keep up the good work and update regularly!

Well I only read until the 3rd chapter and I couldn’t bear to read it until further on. I haven’t seen a weong spelled word so thats nice, the thing that made me drop this is because the author made the mc too OP. I mean the Mc is only 10-11 years old yet he got 3 powerfull skills. The water flowing technique in OP and lucifer from reincarnated as a slime and then there’s this skill that allows him to use a more powerfull version of sunshine without being weakened in the night and sun breathing. Even though I also made my Mc OP, this is on a while different level. Hope this helps you get sn understanding of the novel.

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