Review Detail of The_reader_ofnovel in Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]
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The novel starts great but slowly turns into a story about your typical lustful protagonist who’s soul reason for anything and everything he does is not to grow as a person but to have a stupidly unrealistic harem. the women become brain dead and completely useless in battle because they are so weak compared to the mc it is so disappointing.
Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]
Huntsman
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Seriously, what do you expect a bunch of 10 year old children to do? Leo has the Game to offset the disadvantages of his age, Rin, Shiro and everyone else don't. Shiro even put up a decent fight against Zouken's Worms, but the matchup is rigged in the Worm's favor from the beginning. Rin's Magecraft literally revolves around *Gems* which she doesn't have because canonically, she's dirt poor thanks to Kotomine ruining her inheritance, meamwhile Gil is quite literally stopping Zouken's army of magical familiars. Seriously, what are you talking about?!
Then what about the Y#ri i stopped reading when ciri says she has a thing for triss it isnt a harem if the girls have a thing for each other and the mc its just polycule at this point if its y#ri during s#x With the mc only and not outside without the mc with no romance involved then its a harem
Huntsman:Seriously, what do you expect a bunch of 10 year old children to do? Leo has the Game to offset the disadvantages of his age, Rin, Shiro and everyone else don't. Shiro even put up a decent fight against Zouken's Worms, but the matchup is rigged in the Worm's favor from the beginning. Rin's Magecraft literally revolves around *Gems* which she doesn't have because canonically, she's dirt poor thanks to Kotomine ruining her inheritance, meamwhile Gil is quite literally stopping Zouken's army of magical familiars. Seriously, what are you talking about?!
Venerable_Read3r:Then what about the Y#ri i stopped reading when ciri says she has a thing for triss it isnt a harem if the girls have a thing for each other and the mc its just polycule at this point if its y#ri during s#x With the mc only and not outside without the mc with no romance involved then its a harem
Idk so far until i stopped reading there hasn't been any but who Knows Besides some people use Ntr wrong so don't sweat it until you read it
TheAngels:I read that there is ntr with kotomine, is it true?
There is tons of yuri in this novel. practically every female that is supposed to love and be in a relationship with the mc is gay for there friends or other females. The mc just lets it happen and acts like a cuck.this was so disappointing.
TheAngels:I read that there is ntr with kotomine, is it true?
The_reader_ofnovel:There is tons of yuri in this novel. practically every female that is supposed to love and be in a relationship with the mc is gay for there friends or other females. The mc just lets it happen and acts like a cuck.this was so disappointing.