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2022-08-05 16:14

The Author should update more. This novel has a lot of potential to perform well. The mc's development will be worthwhile to read. Overall this is a very good concept for a novel and the Author should just update more.

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First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusion for the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it. in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake here As character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is. as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh. as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for now overall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novel are Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective

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