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wudux
wuduxLv22yr
2022-05-14 01:31

if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((

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SILENTKILLER
4.6
122 Chs

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Mythwalker
MythwalkerLv2

I only understood that you don't like exposition and for the rest of the 300 or so characters, I have no idea. Well, in the end, I can't force you to like this, now I'll change my writing style cuz I like writing this way.

2yr
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Dark_Dolphin_007
Dark_Dolphin_007Lv4

learn to form a normal sentence-)

2yr
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Keimuru
KeimuruLv13

uhh...huh?

2yr
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wudux
wuduxLv2

if you think that: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but it`s ok if your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about what feel MC and how not so cool MC and he good that, but another moment then MC transform to idiot. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy, we don`t need about what he think or how he think, do not load your MC so many words. do not explain his action or actions, describe the case more naturally. there is no room for the reader to think for himself about the world of the character of the hero and his actions. maybe I want to say: "show us how stupid your character is, without explaining how stupid he is" i dont remember it`s been a long time....

2yr
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BloodySoap
BloodySoapLv11

So far Story is good. I like the concept. Keep it up. ................................................................................................. pls, add tags for the novel.

3yr

Shadowlancer101
Shadowlancer101Lv4

Sir Silent Killer.Please Add the Tags, would make it possible for the novel to be found through advanced search and would allow us to use more fast passes.

2yr
ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

2yr
Zedka
ZedkaLv2

Great read, far exceeded my expectations, would recommend. The writing and story quality feels very polished compared to most other novels on this site. I hope this book and the author gain more recognition.

3yr
STEP_FATHER
STEP_FATHERLv11

LISTEN AUTHOR ---- IF YOU ARE WRITING THE NOVEL ,.JUST DON'T DROP THE NOVEL OK JUST DON'T DROP OR ELSE HEAVEN WILL FALL IN YOU !!!!! MARK MY WORDS.......😡🤬

2yr
Shadowlancer101
Shadowlancer101Lv4

Please Please Please come back author-nim this story has great potential and leaving us loyal readers hanging is a war-crime of greatest severity.

2yr
DaoistTWvPz3
DaoistTWvPz3Lv2

First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusion for the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it. in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake here As character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is. as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh. as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for now overall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novel are Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective

3yr
Shadowlancer101
Shadowlancer101Lv4

Sir, why did the updates stop? Are you hiatus or did you leave the novel? Please tell, I have been a reader since the beginning and would like that to continue. Pls Don't let the book be Discontinued....

2yr
PDtareco
PDtarecoLv3

I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions. Is everything fine with you author? As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans. When can we expect the return of the story? Hope you do fine :) . Sorry if I'm annoying you. PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)

2yr
Z6R1A
Z6R1ALv4

Very interesting. Writing quality is incredible. The story is enjoyable. It's addictive to read./......................................................................:)

3yr
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