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wudux
wuduxLv22yr
2022-05-14 01:31

if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((

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Mythwalker
MythwalkerLv2

I only understood that you don't like exposition and for the rest of the 300 or so characters, I have no idea. Well, in the end, I can't force you to like this, now I'll change my writing style cuz I like writing this way.

Dark_Dolphin_007
Dark_Dolphin_007Lv4

learn to form a normal sentence-)

Keimuru
KeimuruLv13

uhh...huh?

wudux
wuduxLv2

if you think that: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but it`s ok if your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about what feel MC and how not so cool MC and he good that, but another moment then MC transform to idiot. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy, we don`t need about what he think or how he think, do not load your MC so many words. do not explain his action or actions, describe the case more naturally. there is no room for the reader to think for himself about the world of the character of the hero and his actions. maybe I want to say: "show us how stupid your character is, without explaining how stupid he is" i dont remember it`s been a long time....

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DaoistTWvPz3Lv2

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