The story premise is good however, 20 chapters in, I'm already tired of both the FL and ML. FL is so insecure, she has not trust in her fiancé. If I were him, I wouldn't be able to stand her mood swings. A person can only tell you so many times to trust them. He's not stupid, he knows her "sister" is up to no good. But she can't trust him. He's no angel either. He doesn't explain anything, he seems more interested in her body, or rather, that's the only way he knows to communicate with her. I wouldn't be able to continue with someone who doesn't give any ounce of reassurance except for the fact that he won't dump me because his grandfather has decided I'm to be the granddaughter-in-law. Plus there's the terrible foreshadowing that her mother is not her real mother. I want to save some brain cells so I'll pass on this story. Pity because the story was interesting the first chapters.
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