Review Detail of ColexBoy in Diving into Dungeons

The writting quality for a non-native is top notch, I don't see many mistakes and it seems you are just a novice, so I expect great growth. I don't know how well you will update, but I hope it's at least once a week. The story seems promising and I just can't wait to see how it will unfold AS for the character design, at the moment, tailor seems pretty bland so I hope i see some character development in the future. The world background is okay for a nove. All in all, a decent start.