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2022-03-21 16:34

Hello Author, I finally read it till 17 Chapters and honestly, it was great. The plot was fantastic and I like the concept of this story. The characters are interesting, especially their conversation between Ray and Momo (cute name) The pace is good and it's thrilling. The first chapter left a big impression making me want to read more and I would definitely recommend this to my friends. The way you wrote was really impressive not too high excessive language where I had to keep a dictionary beside me.😅😅😂😂 Not too many backgrounds detail which is to my liking and finally, overall, it was very good. Great job. keep up the good work👍👍👌👌

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