even with just the 1st few chapters you can already see that this is just a power fantasy of the author with the new cliche of using children make the story more appealing when it is so bland it's like eating paper the MC is trash wasting his life when he could have trained himself but the got a system instead just to power him up how lazy of a writingis that
Cloud Fire Pheonix
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