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2022-11-06 14:40

This one is a gem! The writing quality is top-notch. The characters don't act out of their character ( like many characters in other novels). The MC has a troubled past so his personality isn't that of a 'good guy', which is understandable, and I like this kind of development. I just hope that his trust issues would be resolved in the future. Poor MC doesn't even have a living family.

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Updated Review: Writing Quality: 5 Stars (I have always been a fanatic about writing quality. The least I can say confidently that you will never find language skill lacking in any manner. And I am making improvements by day. Stability of Updates: 2 Stars (I was consistent at first, for like first 400 chapters. But then I couldn't maintain the same rate, regardless the excuses. Anyway, one chapter daily for a few months at least from now on.) Story Development: 3 Stars (The start of the story feels generic, even to me. But it develops beautifully. Also, I have taken great challenges to keep the fanfic as close to as an Original Novel, including new ideas. It may not to be preference of all, but its good as long as you give it a chance.) Character Design: 3 Stars (Kai Stormborn is a highly complex character. Circumstances had forced him to become someone he had never even thought of becoming. Mentioning anything about him will be a spoiler, so I am leaving it here.) World Background: 4 Stars (I like researching, and love to imagine how one world's characters and concepts would interact with others. Needless to say, all included worlds and background setting had been thoroughly researched and presented with better clearance for the readers. You won't find anything lacking here.) At the end, I would request you guys to give my Original Novel a look too. It's a comedic take on Harem, Villain, and Romance tags. Try a few chapters and see if it suits your taste. Good luck droopyauthor

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Review after Vol. 1 Q. What readers can expect from the novel? A. If you have read Terror Infinity and the Ultimate Evolution, then you would also like this novel. MC will travel through Multiverse (books, anime, and movies World) in Mission-like scenarios. Every next mission will be more difficult and will need more time (i.e. chapters) to be completed. From Vol. 3, MC will have the option to reincarnate as books/anime characters. The story is Dark, and it has Mystery elements. So if you don't like these things, please refrain from giving out an early review. If you are looking for romance, then it will be there from Vol.2 onwards. I needed to give a thorough description of how the System works, and thr upcoming Worlds, and the time limit of first mission was small. The rest can be some up in few words - Action, adventure, cool items and skills, and cooler interaction. Q. What do I mean from the warning in synopsis? A. I mean what it is. If you can't put efforts to understand the plot, and want to read something like a children book, then don't bother to read. As far as I am concerned, there are no plot holes, and if you find one, then you can comment and let me know. Q. Which worlds to expect? A. Vol. 1 has Harry Potter canon world, related to Beedle the Bard. Vol. 2 will have both Harry Potter and Game of Thrones (from actual series and books, not canon). Vol. 3 will have animes and Harry Potter but I have not decided yet. PS: Don't ask me abt Harem. MC will have love interests depending on the world, but I have not finalized it yet.

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This is one of the best works I have read on this site. There isn't much to complain about here, mostly subjective and personal preferences which have no bearing on the objective quality of the novel. Firstly, grammar, work structure, paragraph placing, and writing quality itself is one of the best on this site and as a whole there are a few typos scattered around a hundred chapters, which is basically nothing. I haven't followed this fanfic from the start, but from what I can see, there are 360 chapters in 8 months, which is a pretty solid update ratio, especially considering the chapters' quality. Story development is original and unexpected. There are some twists there that aren't predictable. The protagonist has interesting abilities, and although very powerful, it isn't to an unreasonable extent and he doesn't steamroll everything he comes across. The start of it however is a little slow, and it takes a while to get into the meat of the story, but pretty solid nonetheless. Every character has their unique personality traits and quirks. The main character is a cold and power hungry individual, my personal favorite. Although his very logical and benefit-oriented view on his relationships with every character is looking to make a very lonely existence out of him at the peak of power he is seeking. However, I think the author has something planned for this, as well. World background is extremely unique, which is unexpected, considering most of the story happens in previously established fiction. The author manages to give these fictions an original flavor. All in all, I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who is a fan of works such as Reverend Insanity, Warlock of the Magus world, and Ultimate Evolution. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4.5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5

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